IELTS в RBSM

IELTS урок 8 от RBSM

Lesson: IELTS writing I results and analysis.

• Organizing: replace students in better order:

Analysis of the writing I results:

Some phrases from the analyses to be discussed:

Population growth in Australia - 2001

Task 1: Sample of a proper answer

The top two pie graphs show that there was only a very slight increase in the Australian population in 2001.

The growth came fairly equally from both a natural birth increase and immigrants moving to the country.

The bottom pie chart represents a breakdown of the countries from which the immigrants came. With a contribution

of 34%, North and West Europe easily make up the largest portion of people settling down in Australia.

The next largest contributors are Asia and South and East Europe – with indexes of 23% and 21% respectively.

Not surprisingly given its geographical location, New Zealand is next making up 9% of the immigration total

and the Americas are only one percent less, which consequently is 8%.

The least significant part of expatriates comes from North Africa and the Middle East.

The amount of 5% is taken from the pie chart to indicate the immigrants from these countries.

Without the large number of expatriates from the European continent (55%), Australia’s population would have

been significantly reduced. Given its proximity to Australia, perhaps Asia and New Zealand will continue to play

a major part in the growth of the Australian population.